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Considering DNFing this book.
While there is a solid plot and the story seems well-conceived. There are several issues with the writing of this book that I cannot get past.
Tensing - I feel like this book needed several revisions with respect to grammar and tense. I’ve never been a fan of swapping between first and third person narration, but this is killing the book for me.
— Aug 11, 2024 09:52AM
While there is a solid plot and the story seems well-conceived. There are several issues with the writing of this book that I cannot get past.
Tensing - I feel like this book needed several revisions with respect to grammar and tense. I’ve never been a fan of swapping between first and third person narration, but this is killing the book for me.
