Amanda’s Reviews > Summer Son > Status Update
Amanda
is 98% done
I've liked this overall, but I think some parts could have been fleshed out more. I generally don't mind instalove (even if I think it's unrealistic & cheesy), but this was WAY instalove to me.
— Feb 26, 2016 12:48PM
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Amanda
is 54% done
This is a cute story, but I've got about a million problems with Ellis not having a phone number or address for his ex who has visitation every other weekend with his son. He seems a good father otherwise, but that's not acceptable parenting to me.
— Feb 26, 2016 08:19AM
Amanda
is 34% done
***Spoilers*** I'm having trouble with some of Ellis's decision making in this story. He has unprotected sex with someone he's just met? That's unsafe in general, why risk yourself in that way when a child depends on you??
— Feb 26, 2016 06:18AM
