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Martin Harrington is starting
Not much to say about this so far. A competently-written story with intriguing ideas, but I don’t know if those ideas are going to pay off, or just make me roll my eyes.
Aug 12, 2024 05:22PM
Summerhill

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Martin Harrington
Martin Harrington is 45% done
Ok, so they’re actually doing interesting things with the fallout from that intimate scene I mentioned earlier. Kudos.
Aug 13, 2024 01:48PM
Summerhill


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Martin Harrington is on page 3
This intimate scene is more than a little uncomfortable. The narration keeps mentioning the other party’s “hesitance,” and our main character keeps forging ahead regardless. We’re supposed to see it as consensual, but… ugh.
Aug 13, 2024 12:51PM
Summerhill


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