Penumbra’s Reviews > Knight of Ocean Avenue > Status Update

No! That can't logistically happen! Giles is sitting at the table next to Mitch. ACROSS the table sits the parents and Shaz. Giles CANNOT put his arm around Shaz and give him a kiss on the cheek if he's sitting across the table from him. You can't just put in a scene like that for convenience if it doesn't fit what was written earlier. Ugh! Why did no one catch this? Editor where are you?