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Jen
Jen is on page 84 of 160
How does getting stabbed in the shoulder kill them?!? There was NO mention of poison on the blades. This is just STUPID.
Aug 19, 2024 05:03PM
Kaina of the Great Snow Sea 1

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Wow. That was incredibly short and kinda meh. Review to come. 8/19/24
Aug 19, 2024 05:10PM
Kaina of the Great Snow Sea 1


Jen
Jen is on page 42 of 160
So far this makes very little sense. The action scenes are drawn in a way that my brain is unable to understand and the world building seems to expect the reader to make most of the leaps themselves. I don’t mind filling in a few blanks here and there, but the author really should be doing the heavy lifting.
Aug 19, 2024 04:59PM
Kaina of the Great Snow Sea 1


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