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"John's stomach now rumbled and he scoured at the sinful chocolate [cupcakes]."
— Oct 28, 2011 03:28PM
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Oct 28, 2011 04:37PM
Uhhh, "scoured"? Doesn't really seem to be the appropriate word...
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Well if the cupcakes weren't in front of him maybe "scoured" would've worked. But yeah, I think "scowled" was what the author was going for.

