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Did I mention she’s in command of a merchant fleet? She is young enough to not have been married off, and suddenly she is in command - not the uncle who is now her guardian, not the male cousins who have been trained to be her officers.
Add to that the bouncing POV, and this has become a likely DNF. Maybe someday, but it’s doubtful.
— Aug 25, 2024 04:29PM
Add to that the bouncing POV, and this has become a likely DNF. Maybe someday, but it’s doubtful.
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Jennifer
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“When he had barged into the sick bay, he stopped in his tracks when he saw her in the light. She was exotic, with almond-shaped green eyes, the color of a lush garden in spring. Her long, flowing white and yellow hair was pulled to the side. Everyone he knew had dark features. As he tried to assert himself, his mind had wandered. Her presence disarmed him.”
He’s Asian, BTW, & she’s Irish.
— Aug 25, 2024 04:23PM
He’s Asian, BTW, & she’s Irish.
Jennifer
is starting
I’ve made it to chapter 5. I don’t think I can go much further.
There is no depth. The main character’s parents are killed in chapter 1, she completely rolls with it, takes control through magic (that she isn’t supposed to show anyone, but makes sure her uncle sees), and sets off on an 18 month journey.
Suddenly you are introduced to a new character, who dreams of her. They meet and are drawn together.
— Aug 25, 2024 04:21PM
There is no depth. The main character’s parents are killed in chapter 1, she completely rolls with it, takes control through magic (that she isn’t supposed to show anyone, but makes sure her uncle sees), and sets off on an 18 month journey.
Suddenly you are introduced to a new character, who dreams of her. They meet and are drawn together.
