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One thing I’m not very fond of is authors describing all the clothes and hairstyles characters are wearing. Especially if it isn’t of importance for the story. It’s filler and it’s frustrating because in the next line I’ve already forgotten, especially when it’s a side character.
— Aug 26, 2024 06:33AM
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this book makes me feel like it should have a detailed map of the Ironside grounds, with details on buildings and stuff, multiple pictures/drawings of both clothes and shibari, vids of dance and singing. It’s like; the description in the book is a bit too much. It’s a lot of words saying a whole lotta nothing. While at other parts there’s a lot of tell instead of show.
— Aug 26, 2024 11:28AM
