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I mean, if it's your book you can introduce a bunch of characters, supplying no details about them, through narrative instead of introducing them during plot development...
I'm sure it will improve as this author seems popular.
— Aug 26, 2024 11:36AM
I'm sure it will improve as this author seems popular.
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Spoiler prediction hinted at
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Pronouns in place of nouns, a pseudonym for Charles/Eric to use when talking to Lizzy. I hope I haven't guessed the main twist 20% of the way in. Especially since the twist would be just a trick on the reader, not a twist for the characters.
— Aug 26, 2024 12:36PM
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Pronouns in place of nouns, a pseudonym for Charles/Eric to use when talking to Lizzy. I hope I haven't guessed the main twist 20% of the way in. Especially since the twist would be just a trick on the reader, not a twist for the characters.
