🔮DivaShah’s Reviews > It's Wrong for Me to Love You > Status Update

This friendship is so wrong on so many levels...Ne'Veah is trying so hard to be loyal (at least that's what it looks like) to Charlie. Yet Charlie not even taking their friendship serious. She is in fact tired of the friendship. The story line is just average. Another thing. Don't be afraid to use pronouns. Every other sentence its "that boy" "that girl." It's ok to he, him, she, or her too.