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My Archetypes Is the Quest because the Lord Roland has to Face many obstacles when he is fight like ducking or swinging a sword. He's fighting and there's a guy that is mad at Lord Roland I started going crazy. Roland has to dodge these guys attacks but he couldn't dodge most of them. This is what Roland is going through in my book

The connection that i'm going to use is text to self. In the book is when I could train with the guys for war, I help people with thing make them better at it.I could fight in a war, I do a lot of training for it.I could be a good leader I know where to attack and what they are doing.

My main character feels like he doesn't need to stress or be happy just normal.My main character does training,makes deals, and is being the king.
My main character says that thing about training,wars, fights, and people.
The author makes this so he describes the character and make you know the character better.

The Antagonist for my book is Is the enemy when they go to war they are the enemy. There is no more,that is why they are training for war and want to fight all the time. Lord Roland wants to win the war.

I wonder how Arnulf got in the book he or her may be important or it can be just a random person, that the author just adds. In the book he or her keeps on snorting and I wonder if that could be a clue to something or not.The book keeps on say that I think it's his or her nose running.

My character is dynamic he still acts the same and he is still nice.Also he been called king more often than he has, on page 79 "That"s easy enough to see,my lord.I hope it"s taught him a lesson..."

My character is dynamic he still acts the same and he is still nice.Also he been called king more often than he has, on page 79 "That"s easy enough to see,my lord.I hope it"s taught him a lesson..."