Aunt Missa’s Reviews > That Crooked Grin > Status Update
Aunt Missa
is 57% done
Finally, some paragraphs longer than 2 sentences. But this kissing scene is just so misplaced and weird. There’s been zero tension build up
— Sep 15, 2024 02:29PM
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Aunt Missa
is 37% done
The sentences are so short and the conversations between the characters is so stilted. The dialogue never gets into a flow. Ollie and Dahlia talk like 6th graders and not adults.
— Sep 15, 2024 02:11PM
