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Starlight
is 98% done
Everything about this was so shit, it’s not even funny.
Like if I was buddy reading this, I would be unable to even find a slimmer of humor to make things lighter
It’s certainly easier to poke fun and holes when it’s seemingly infrequent,
But bc this entire book from start to finds was so poorly written, it’s no longer funny. Just bad.
Totally judging anyone who raves about this shit.
— Sep 16, 2024 11:22AM
Like if I was buddy reading this, I would be unable to even find a slimmer of humor to make things lighter
It’s certainly easier to poke fun and holes when it’s seemingly infrequent,
But bc this entire book from start to finds was so poorly written, it’s no longer funny. Just bad.
Totally judging anyone who raves about this shit.
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Starlight
is 97% done
One reviewer put into words just couldn’t …
The way this was written, the characters seemed immature and over the top cringe.
It def gave off the impression that they were just bad at sex. ESP the mmc.
Not even going to get into how shit the “dirty talk” was. There was not one sexy or erotic moment throughout..
Anyone with any appearance could be bad at sex sure, but this mmc was just ugly af.
— Sep 16, 2024 11:20AM
The way this was written, the characters seemed immature and over the top cringe.
It def gave off the impression that they were just bad at sex. ESP the mmc.
Not even going to get into how shit the “dirty talk” was. There was not one sexy or erotic moment throughout..
Anyone with any appearance could be bad at sex sure, but this mmc was just ugly af.
Starlight
is 96% done
Not to mention that ugly af photo cover
I think it was Reddit recommendation for this book
Ugh
Fucking idiots.
— Sep 16, 2024 11:15AM
I think it was Reddit recommendation for this book
Ugh
Fucking idiots.
Starlight
is 95% done
It’s the dialogue
The writing
Utter shit.
It’s giving cringe,
It’s giving shitty wattpad,
It’s giving low budget pxrnhxb,
Somehow I read most of this though
Ugh
It really shouldn’t even be classified as dark,
The only thing it is, is shit.
— Sep 16, 2024 11:14AM
The writing
Utter shit.
It’s giving cringe,
It’s giving shitty wattpad,
It’s giving low budget pxrnhxb,
Somehow I read most of this though
Ugh
It really shouldn’t even be classified as dark,
The only thing it is, is shit.
Starlight
is 50% done
…
I read a few hours
Took a break to do a bunch of stuff
Not eager to get back to the story..
This book is too fucking long.
I’ve already forgotten most of what I read
All I’m left with atm
Is a sense of boredom and exhaustion
Eugh
— Sep 16, 2024 12:23AM
I read a few hours
Took a break to do a bunch of stuff
Not eager to get back to the story..
This book is too fucking long.
I’ve already forgotten most of what I read
All I’m left with atm
Is a sense of boredom and exhaustion
Eugh
