average human’s Reviews > Imprinted Tattoos > Status Update

Great concept horrendous execution besides the grammar mistakes and obvious tense errors. There is no expansion on the imprint tattoos and not much world building. Is the world fantasy and magical? How is Mc 22 and still in high school? The whole story and interactions don’t feel realistic and at times they feel really really fake.

His voice deeper and husky, his breath whispering against my ear sending shivers through me. His arm tightens around my waist slightly, fortunately not causing any pain to my ribs and bringing his fingers to rest on a small sliver of skin that has been exposed by tank top riding up.

As soon as he's close enough I peck him lightly on the cheek, lingering when the same electricity that sparked with the others, sizzles through me.
He inhales sharply and turns slightly so his cheek brushes against mine. His strong-arm wraps around my waist bringing me tightly against him.
"What was that for Beautiful Girl?"

"Yes Beautiful, you did" he replies chuckling. He turns to lead us into the classroom, but I reach out and take a hold of his arm turning him back to face me. Before I can lose my courage, I go up on my tip toes, keeping my arm tucked in tight to avoid jostling my ribs, he automatically crouches down a bit, thinking I'm going to say something to him that I don't want other people over hearing.

Is it a fantasy world? Why are they not expanding on the tattoos. Also I’m pretty sure they all know Mc is the cause of the pain that why they keep kissing her.