Nancy’s Reviews > Bearing it for the Outlaw > Status Update

I'm so tired of reading the "you don't know how bad I want in you right now", "I'm so hard for you" stuff during a lust/sex scene. Don't keep saying it, do something already. Enough fingering, enough kissing and licking etc, etc, etc! Just get on with it if you can't wait, stop saying and just do! You can go slow next time, do all that other stuff next time. She's told you "now", "I want you" etc.

First page. Feel like I'm reading Dakota's Claim again. Considering how Drevin had been feeling when he first saw Allie and given his age, I kind of thought he would not have waited around. I thought he would have been faster to get something going.