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Struggling with this one. Here's what I found either off or annoying:
- the thing with Prue "sensing" that someone is watching her is unrealistic and got exhausting real fast.
- Theo being obsessive is too sudden and unjustified. Just because you went to Harvard doesn't mean you've got the capacity to become an obsessive Stalker.
- We get it, Theo, you're "dominant" jeez.
- The writing... it's not clicking for this.
— Sep 14, 2024 06:39AM
- the thing with Prue "sensing" that someone is watching her is unrealistic and got exhausting real fast.
- Theo being obsessive is too sudden and unjustified. Just because you went to Harvard doesn't mean you've got the capacity to become an obsessive Stalker.
- We get it, Theo, you're "dominant" jeez.
- The writing... it's not clicking for this.
