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Chris
is 12% done
This writing is not overly good. I’m having trouble sticking with it, but I’ll persist a while longer. Maybe I can make it all the way; it seems to be reading fairly quickly.
It feels inconsistent. I did not gather there was religious tension from the opening monster scene. Nor that the mother is sketch. Monster fight does not lead there organically. But then this 7yo calls Mom a B and literally says hey cuz.
— Sep 18, 2024 10:06PM
It feels inconsistent. I did not gather there was religious tension from the opening monster scene. Nor that the mother is sketch. Monster fight does not lead there organically. But then this 7yo calls Mom a B and literally says hey cuz.
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Chris
is 65% done
The writing just isn’t great, but this leveling up business is engaging. There’s so much strangeness and off-kilteredness. The relationships are awkwardly portrayed. There is way too much laughing. But there’s a lot of power potential, and we’re all here for it.
— Sep 25, 2024 11:59PM
