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Red Reader
is 67% done
I've tried. Gabriel is a serious piece of work. Just when I think he's gone a bit soft and let his assholeishness go, it comes back with a vengeance. He's hateful, arrogant, and manipulative and wants everything to be all about him and his way. I love dominant male characters who mean business, but this guy is a straight-up ass. He deserves to be alone.
DNF at 67%. Honestly, I don't know why I even read this far.
— Sep 25, 2024 02:06PM
DNF at 67%. Honestly, I don't know why I even read this far.
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Red Reader
is 31% done
“You’re not the bad guy here, Gabriel, I know I did the wrong thing by not telling you, but I was scared and alone and it hasn’t been easy."
WTAF!? She tried to gell him! She went to NY to tell him in person and he wouldn't see her! He IS the bad guy! Everything about this man screams a giant f*cking NO!! Stop being a doormat! Aaaaaaah!!!
— Sep 22, 2024 04:58PM
WTAF!? She tried to gell him! She went to NY to tell him in person and he wouldn't see her! He IS the bad guy! Everything about this man screams a giant f*cking NO!! Stop being a doormat! Aaaaaaah!!!
Red Reader
is 27% done
"I told everyone that they were conceived through IVF using donor sperm.”
Babe. You already said you were artificially inseminated. IVF isn't the same. Get your shit together.
— Sep 22, 2024 04:42PM
Babe. You already said you were artificially inseminated. IVF isn't the same. Get your shit together.
Red Reader
is 19% done
If you're going to write an American character living in America please use American dialog! This is stupid. No one calls it a nappy, windscreen, or muesli bar. It's diaper, windshield, and granola bar. Why not make her Australian and living in USA? Easier. *another eye roll*
— Sep 22, 2024 12:18PM
Red Reader
is 17% done
She says she was artificially inseminated. She uses those exact words!! Noooo. And the Dr just goes with it. Then two heartbeats and asks of twins run in her family. Um, helllo!? Hard eye roll.
— Sep 22, 2024 08:35AM
Red Reader
is 17% done
At 17% and I don't know if I can go on. The MMC is such a dick. The writing is robotic and cringy with no substance or depth. And how many times does a girl "screw her face up in tears"?! Gaaah!!! I just can't.
— Sep 22, 2024 08:33AM
