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Sydney M
is 23% done
This book feels clunky and a little juvenile… I don’t feel like I’m reading poems at all - it feels more like I’m reading a sparksnote of an autobiography. I’m sure there is an audience out there for this style but it’s not me
— Sep 16, 2024 07:56AM
Sydney M
is 10% done
So far these feel less like poems and more like vignettes. I’m not seeing a a lot of metaphor (or any other literary devices for that matter). All in all, this book just isn’t very interesting so far. I wish it was more intellectually stimulating than it is
— Sep 16, 2024 07:47AM

