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If my book were a play the set on stage would be like a small town. There would be a cardboard cutout or something along those lines of houses and a courthouse in the background while Stevie walks around the city to gather information about the case. When he goes into the courthouse there could be chairs, tables, and filing cabinets.
Sep 30, 2024 10:54AM
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Today, I finished the book, and Doyle met with the kids to discuss the real story, and he came to accept it. He explained that he was not the drunk driver, but he felt as if he was at fault because while both he and his wife were drunk, he could drive better. Since his wife was less drunk the officer made her drive, and it caused them to crash killing his wife.
Oct 14, 2024 10:48AM
Change-up: Mystery at the World Series (The Sports Beat, #4)


Talan Walstrom
Talan Walstrom is on page 292 of 320
As much as I wanted to act like the punch didn't hurt my hand, it did. I could not let that be known with all of these people around. Thankfully the security guard separated us before things escalated because I don't think I could have held him off for any longer or won the fight.
Oct 10, 2024 10:53AM
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Talan Walstrom
Talan Walstrom is on page 258 of 320
The main character in my story is feeling very confused. He has been told multiple stories and he does not know who to believe or what he should do. He was getting nervous towards the end of my reading when he was confronted and it could be acted out in many ways. His eyes would be darting around and his voice would be shaky. One gesture could be his eyes darting around or he keeps looking around.
Oct 04, 2024 10:56AM
Change-up: Mystery at the World Series (The Sports Beat, #4)


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Oct 04, 2024 10:53AM
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Talan Walstrom
Talan Walstrom is on page 230 of 320
The theme in my story is there's more than meets the eye. You can never get the full details just by looking at a person or an event. In my story, they keep finding more evidence about the death of Annalise Doyle. At first, they thought she died in a normal car accident, but it's now been uncovered her husband was drunk and hit a tree There were more people involved In the coverup than previously thought.
Sep 24, 2024 10:53AM
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Talan Walstrom
Talan Walstrom is on page 201 of 320
In the story the main conflict is what happened to Doyle's wife. The main character Stevie is investigating it by visiting the town where the accident happened and talking to residents who knew something about that night. Although it is hard for him to get solid evidence about what happened, he keeps persevering to find out what truly happened.
Sep 20, 2024 10:53AM
Change-up: Mystery at the World Series (The Sports Beat, #4)


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Sep 20, 2024 10:51AM
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Talan Walstrom
Talan Walstrom is on page 172 of 320
I am not very familiar with many actors, but if I had to pick one to play the main character in my book, I would be young Zachary Gordon. I think he did a good job playing Greg in Diary of a Wimpy Kid, and the main character in my book and Greg from Diary of a Wimpy Kid have many similar character traits.
Sep 18, 2024 09:59AM
Change-up: Mystery at the World Series (The Sports Beat, #4)


Talan Walstrom
Talan Walstrom is on page 136 of 320
In my reading, one thing that identifies as a symbol is Norbet Doyle's children. They are a symbol of how god is cruel and kind at the same time. Doyle himself says god is cruel for taking their mother away from them, but kind for making them so good.
Sep 16, 2024 10:50AM
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Talan Walstrom
Talan Walstrom is on page 111 of 320
"He couldn't help but notice how quiet the walkway under the third-base stands was-especially when compared with the night before". It helps me get an idea of the setting because I can imagine a very quiet walkway while leaving a baseball game.
Sep 12, 2024 10:54AM
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