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Shaylan Patel
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My point of view is 1st person because it just talked about the person in the story. It doesn't say you and I. I know because it only talks about the person that's having a bad day.
— Sep 30, 2024 11:23AM
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Shaylan Patel
is on page 300 of 336
Visualize: In my head I think what is going on to her because she goes stuff that is crazy. My feelings are like sometimes my heart drops and i'm like what is she doing. " I first wake up and the hazy light filters through my blinds,striping my white blanket like there were bars on my window." I sometimes see the sun coming through my blinds and waking me up. I visualize me in my bed waking up to the sun.
— Jan 13, 2025 11:18AM
Shaylan Patel
is on page 280 of 336
Making Connections: When she went to the doctors she fine. When she went outside this boy started following back home. She left the doctor a note that said " Please watch the camera look in the entrances of the hospital and see how is following her. When I read that i'm like how does she know that someone was going to follow her back? I heard that my friend went somewhere and someone followed him back home.
— Jan 06, 2025 11:16AM
Shaylan Patel
is on page 250 of 336
The characters are this girl The girl is still in school she is about to go to high school . She goes with her friends to haunted house and a ghost followers her back and haunted her. She doesn't know that is a ghost. The ghost doesn't follow her friends back.
— Dec 16, 2024 11:15AM
Shaylan Patel
is on page 229 of 336
My character wants to a normal girl. They are ghost following her. The ghost doesn't want to heave her alone. She went to a haunted house and then a ghost went back with her to her house and it is haunting her every since.
— Dec 09, 2024 11:23AM
Shaylan Patel
is on page 170 of 336
I have many questions about my book. Why did she go to the haunted house. Why did she go into a random persons house. Why did she get hurt in the haunted house.
— Nov 04, 2024 11:16AM

