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DNF 30% I don't think this writing style was for me. There was so much internal monologue that was unnecessary for the story or repetitive. In the beginning we got the backstory of all her friends and their partners that I don't think was needed at all. This book is heavy on details of things that don't matter while also choosing to tell us how conversations went instead of writing those scenes out.
Sep 30, 2024 12:21PM
Elevator Pitch

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