jo firstofhername’s Reviews > Pucking Around > Status Update
jo firstofhername
is 29% done
I'm so frustrated, I don't really like the fmc but the mmc's are great and I still want to know what happens next. This story is so long but then they suddenly jump to sharing smut, seemingly without preamble.
— Oct 01, 2024 02:20AM
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jo firstofhername
is 64% done
Okay, firstly, how did this scene even come about, who knows, and how the hell did I end up standing here right now laughing at the absurdity and comedy of this situation. The kitchen scene where Caleb, Rachel and Ilmari get to know each other a bit better and Jake suddenly walks in and realises he's jealous because Ilmari is touching Caleb's piercings, hilarious.
— Oct 01, 2024 09:06AM
