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Olga S
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Ok these similes are really distracting... I counted 15 in one chapter. And the "...like lava in my chest" is used too many times. Okay, we got it. It burns. Find some other way to describe it🤔
— Oct 05, 2024 02:56PM
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Olga S
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FMC is a little over the top dramatic for a 17year old protagonist... Also, why are they fighting?
— Oct 03, 2024 06:19AM
