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Brynette Turner
Brynette Turner is 50% done
The book started well and held my interest. Unfortunately, the story gets bogged down and becomes boring. At 50%, the objective is still unclear, the character development is superficial, and the plot has no forward movement. Plus, the training island concept is seriously underdeveloped despite having scene after scene of the torturous indoctrination.
Oct 08, 2024 09:50PM
The Mountain of Souls (The Chosen, #1)

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