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is 25% done
Horrible grammar. Extreme overuse of commas. Did this even meet an editor's eyes?
I hate to give bad reviews, but I am having a very difficult time getting past the bad grammar and poor spelling. The author consistently uses "it's" when she should use "its," "loose" when she means "lose," and many more. She has misplaced modifiers on nearly every page, and her overuse of commas is maddening.
— Mar 22, 2016 12:12AM
I hate to give bad reviews, but I am having a very difficult time getting past the bad grammar and poor spelling. The author consistently uses "it's" when she should use "its," "loose" when she means "lose," and many more. She has misplaced modifiers on nearly every page, and her overuse of commas is maddening.
Jenn
is 18% done
Horrible grammar. Extreme overuse of commas. Did this even meet an editor's eyes?
— Mar 21, 2016 03:26AM
