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Jennifer
is 97% done
Perhaps it’s the fact I have 2 daughters of “Marriageable Age” but the fact that she only speaks to her mom once throughout the entire boo - and then rushes a wedding in another country & her parents are not even worth a passing thought?
Who does that?
No thoughts of anyone outside her new little circle of ‘special people’ even exists in her mind. Meh.
— Oct 10, 2024 08:03PM
Who does that?
No thoughts of anyone outside her new little circle of ‘special people’ even exists in her mind. Meh.
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Jennifer
is 60% done
I’m 60% through, and the story has already had a major climactic moment.
It has felt very rushed, with weeks skipping past in about a paragraph. It feels like book 1 should’ve ended a chapter ago, but there wasn’t enough “meat” to the story to really have the reader invested enough to continue with another book.
Carlin needs more depth as a character. Maddox is moody & dark. That’s about it.
— Oct 10, 2024 06:50AM
It has felt very rushed, with weeks skipping past in about a paragraph. It feels like book 1 should’ve ended a chapter ago, but there wasn’t enough “meat” to the story to really have the reader invested enough to continue with another book.
Carlin needs more depth as a character. Maddox is moody & dark. That’s about it.
