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So, I don’t necessarily “dislike” all these scenes from the past about her online dating foibles, but I’m puzzled by how *much* space they’re taking in the book, when the much more interesting and relevant stuff is in the present. Maybe it matters? With this being (potentially) a time travel story and all… But at the moment it feels meandering and bogged down.
— Oct 11, 2024 10:41AM
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I don’t get this relationship… He’s a quantum physicist who spends his every waking hour entranced by the wonders of the universe, yet our protagonist, a woman who has exhibited absolutely ZILCH of a personality or drive or even a basic hobby, is the person he keeps saying is so “interesting”? WHAT is so “interesting” about her!?? Either I don’t get it or this is really lazy character-building.
— Oct 13, 2024 04:19PM
