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Jonathon Hagger
Jonathon Hagger is on page 151 of 320
Exquisite writing, extremely fast pace. Almost a bit too well written and too fast. I’d prefer a slightly slower pace to allow more character development.
Oct 12, 2024 11:54PM
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Jonathon Hagger
Jonathon Hagger is on page 151 of 320
Fast pace, well written. Would prefer the speed to be a little slower to slow more character development before the crescendo comes
Oct 13, 2024 12:15AM
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Jonathon Hagger
Jonathon Hagger is on page 22 of 320
A fantastic opening stanza
Oct 08, 2024 11:40PM
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