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Some Quiet Conversation. Hokey at the end. Became clumsy because the writer could not help himself and just said the ideas of the story outright. This could work, maybe, if 1) earned prior or 2) the sentences were constructed in a more elegant way.
— Oct 16, 2024 03:09AM
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Pia
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The Agonies of Fray Salvador. Amazingly well-written. However, there’re more shortcomings by its awkward combination of 1) conceptual ambition, 2) blatant derivativeness, 3) non-committal authorial self-insert and lastly 4) half-baked academic fight in the footnotes. The last point bring the most distasteful as the narrator’s POV is half of a two-sided argument but is still the weaker half
— Oct 15, 2024 06:09AM
Pia
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Then Cruel Quiet. Components are cliché. Execution was great
— Oct 14, 2024 05:46AM
Pia
is on page 42 of 106
Halfway through, all of the stories are well-written but everything has been a bummer. Filipino Literary fiction that tackles capital-h History in its themes tends to stupefied in cynicism. Its limiting
— Oct 14, 2024 04:48AM
Pia
is on page 35 of 106
A Natural History of Empire. This is the first short story set in the Filipino-American War and told from the perspective of the damned monstrous colonizers that I stomached reading through—even with depictions of slaughter & torture. The reason for this is its center is a Filipino traitor, and how their treachery ultimately tipped the tides against us, and caused out defeat. A cunning mind, a demonic soul.
— Oct 14, 2024 02:37AM
Pia
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The Fingers of Sta Juana. Fuedal relations, so-called-passions, during the period of society they were produced. I liked the style of Sy’s writing, it elevates what would be a standard crime of passion story (although content-wise that is still what it is).
— Oct 14, 2024 12:10AM

