Brynette Turner’s Reviews > Dragonspawn > Status Update
Brynette Turner
is on page 243 of 320
On page 241, the dragon says, "All that self-pity was getting tiresome." I agree! With less than 80 pages left, this is a DNF. It's not enjoyable to have a whiny MC who has to be dragged into any semblance of confidence. It's constantly 3 steps forward and 2 steps back, and all other characters are underdeveloped. There's nothing that makes me want to finish this book or hope book 2 will miraculously be better.
— Oct 20, 2024 09:23AM
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Brynette Turner
is on page 176 of 320
Ugh! I'm getting frustrated with the repetitive and ridiculous hesitation, fear, and self-doubt of the main character. If things don't change soon, this is going into the DNF pile despite the good world-building and interesting plot. The MC shouldn't constantly be the weakest person or stall at every opportunity to grow. It's annoying!
— Oct 20, 2024 07:29AM
