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Jessica
is on page 299 of 368
Well, well, well. If only I hadn’t guessed the most obvious suspect from the beginning.
Brendan Tomkin drowned Grady (motive to fight for Ginger’s love), stole hush money from the foundation to give to Ginger (also the witness) and killed her Dad when things started to get out of control.
The details are rather amateur, and this ending was super predictable. I was hoping it would have been more complicated…
— Oct 24, 2024 05:55PM
Brendan Tomkin drowned Grady (motive to fight for Ginger’s love), stole hush money from the foundation to give to Ginger (also the witness) and killed her Dad when things started to get out of control.
The details are rather amateur, and this ending was super predictable. I was hoping it would have been more complicated…
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Jessica
is on page 271 of 368
I’m starting chapter 33 of 39 + epilogue.
I swear- if the murder mystery ends up revealing Brendan as the villain of this story, I will be severely annoyed from it’s predicability. I’ve been hoping the love interest (Jonathan) or Alanna’s family may be involved to add a plot twist. But I’m getting the feeling that this will be a boring ending with a cheesy message of the importance of faith.
— Oct 17, 2024 05:44PM
I swear- if the murder mystery ends up revealing Brendan as the villain of this story, I will be severely annoyed from it’s predicability. I’ve been hoping the love interest (Jonathan) or Alanna’s family may be involved to add a plot twist. But I’m getting the feeling that this will be a boring ending with a cheesy message of the importance of faith.
Jessica
is on page 197 of 368
Things are finally picking up…
More characters have been introduced, new discoveries are being made, and another murder has taken place on Mackinac! Mr. Hoffmeister must have known something important, and the Tompkins (father and son duo) seem suspicious.
The faith details are uninteresting to me, and the fraudulent art dilemma also seems a bit prudish. Overall, I’m mostly enjoying the imagery of the island.
— Oct 12, 2024 06:14PM
More characters have been introduced, new discoveries are being made, and another murder has taken place on Mackinac! Mr. Hoffmeister must have known something important, and the Tompkins (father and son duo) seem suspicious.
The faith details are uninteresting to me, and the fraudulent art dilemma also seems a bit prudish. Overall, I’m mostly enjoying the imagery of the island.
Jessica
is on page 77 of 368
There is a great deal of sexual tension growing between Alanna and Jonathan…
— Oct 03, 2024 09:59PM
Jessica
is on page 69 of 368
I’m about to start chapter 9. There have been 2 memorable references to faith so far, and I can’t help but believe that Alanna’s fixation on finding justice seems… emotional. The 11-year-old case of a fatal accident amongst teenagers is a misfortune of the past. At this point, I can only imagine what she may uncover about the details, but still.
— Sep 01, 2024 08:54AM
Jessica
is on page 43 of 368
I am now on chapter 6 of 39. The book reads slow-moving and rather simple. That said, I do love a cheesy romance, and most especially, the detailed imagery of Mackinac Island. If I hadn’t loved the island so closely, this wouldn’t be a compelling read. I’m hopeful it picks up soon.
— Aug 31, 2024 09:38AM
