ROMEOISNOTFUNNY’s Reviews > Unbound > Status Update

The writing style is frustrating. What could be good is just flat. The story and concept is good, and I am torn on if I should continue or just leave it.
So much potential, if the author was more like... "as I moved to leave the bed, a arm wrapped around my waist pulling against a firm chest" instead we get some like "his arm around my waist, he pulled me back" or something like that...forgettable flat writing style