EroticaAfterDark (Lilith)’s Reviews > Dead Beginnings > Status Update

OMG. I just... I can't... first we have Twilight / Interview Of A Vampire crossover fan fiction. And... the whole active speech is just ridiculous! For me it sounds like a 12 year old has written this. I'm sorry if this is hurtful but I cannot lie. And where was the editor? There are so many cases of unnecessary repetitions in words and scenes. I'm stunned about the rating, honestly. And this is anything but dark...

Wow, I didn't expect to be that disappointed. I'm actually only continuing because I want this book to prove me wrong...

If the both of them are to re-narrate their meetings from a POV this one is going to be a bore. Everything so far is cliché so far. Yes, it's only 15% but for me it already has gotten worse.

This book has a typical New Adult vibe, apart from that I feel as if I'm reading a Twilight fanfic. It's very obvious and I wish there'd be more mystery and suspense. So far it's rather boring.