Ari Lozada’s Reviews > My Broken Demon > Status Update

Dnf. I really tried. I got to 37% and maybe I’ll come back to it but the story just didn’t flow for me. The dialogue seemed forced and there was no chemistry or connection between the characters. The writing was a bit corny. The author was trying to be dark with it but it just didn’t seem dark. It seemed choppy at times. It jumped without flow. Idk. It was a no for me