Stephanie Kemler’s Reviews > Fairydale > Status Update

Still loving it, still engaged, still haven’t figured it all out yet… but I can see where trimming at least some of the 700 pgs could have helped. There’s a lot of seemingly unnecessary exposition told through dialogue. Like keep that lore TIGHT and EFFICIENT and RELEVANT. And some internal dialogue/spice scene repetition. This is not to say I’m not having fun but I’d like it to pick up a bit.