Mainer207’s Reviews > The Viscount's Bride > Status Update
Mainer207
is 50% done
So many little things wrong...a couple uses of the phrase "could care less"...why does James sound like an American?...and so does one of the younger sisters...the wife of a Viscount is, I believe, a Viscountess not a Countess...that's a Welsh accent? The story itself is pretty interesting but this narrator is not consistent and the author needs a better editor.
— Apr 18, 2016 05:25PM
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