Adie Muller’s Reviews > Shadow Lab: A Blackstone Publishing Anthology > Status Update
Adie Muller
is 76% done
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Story 5
DNF Poor writing: too much exposition crammed into dialogue, weird to follow and all over the place, characters and story didn't hold my attention
— Nov 11, 2024 02:27PM
Story 5
DNF Poor writing: too much exposition crammed into dialogue, weird to follow and all over the place, characters and story didn't hold my attention
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Adie Muller
is 96% done
Ooh wow okay that last story was really good
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— Nov 12, 2024 07:30AM
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Adie Muller
is 82% done
I lost count what number story I'm on
This one, I give 🟢🟢🟢🟢🔴
Very interesting but could have been better
— Nov 12, 2024 06:09AM
This one, I give 🟢🟢🟢🟢🔴
Very interesting but could have been better
Adie Muller
is 46% done
Story 2:
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I was at a 4-star for most of it. It's a bit on the nose and a common premise; but with originality, then the ending really shocked me!
— Nov 10, 2024 03:52AM
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I was at a 4-star for most of it. It's a bit on the nose and a common premise; but with originality, then the ending really shocked me!
Adie Muller
is 33% done
First Story:
🟢🟢🟢🔴🔴 3/5
Cliché, weak pacing/ending, and felt anticlimactic (it felt spoiler-y for the synopsis to include events from 2/3 into the story that would have been more fun as a surprise). I liked the melancholy mood though and the language was well written.
— Nov 08, 2024 06:50AM
🟢🟢🟢🔴🔴 3/5
Cliché, weak pacing/ending, and felt anticlimactic (it felt spoiler-y for the synopsis to include events from 2/3 into the story that would have been more fun as a surprise). I liked the melancholy mood though and the language was well written.
