xtina’s Reviews > The Valley of Tears > Status Update

crazy time hop. also why are we spending pages repeating shit we already know with less than 10% of the final book left?

"and then...she died." CACKLING

so Duna has learned nothing, is still keeping secrets, and basically hasn't grown as a character whatsoever. got it.

**sigh / eyeroll ** nothing like thinking someone is dead to not resolve our problems and forgive everything. I swear this author doesn't actual know how to solve a problem unless death or sex is involved.

Axel and Petra lolololololol - come on so unoriginal you couldn't even use a different girlie than Melina. And Axel's "excuse"...comical.

Oh conflict!! Cue the cringey sex scene 🥴

Chapter 1 - Duna, girlie, chill with the melodramas. not everything is your fault. whatever happened to character growth?