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Sarah Mac is on page 17 of 384

—“You called Don Rafael a coward,” whispered Paco nervously.
—“And why not?” asked Liona with a toss of her tawny head. “He was very rude to me.”

….Strike one: incidental Spanish dude named Paco. Strike two: the toss of her tawny head. 😑 This book is swinging & missing like a nervous rookie.

— Nov 14, 2024 01:11AM

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Sarah Mac is on page 112 of 384

Why is this book so long? There’s no reason it needed to be a SuperRomance—it’s the same plot as a hundred other ‘English rose falls for Spanish aristo’ HPs from this era, yet twice the page count.

— Nov 15, 2024 11:56PM

Sarah Mac is on page 70 of 384

Of course, the heroine isn’t any better. She’s oblivious as to why Miguel’s family is concerned that he decided to marry a girl they perceive as a ‘bullfighter groupie’ (she’s actually a photojournalist) after only knowing each other for a month, makes no effort to culturally assimilate, & does nothing but splutter indignantly over & over with affronted “how dare you” or “you…you…” 🙄

— Nov 15, 2024 03:00PM

Sarah Mac is on page 58 of 384

Dude is pushy, overbearing, rude, & continually insulting to her lineage, looks, & sexual experience (or lack thereof). So of course he makes her horny. 🙄 What a creep. This guy’s not alpha—he’s just a dick.

— Nov 15, 2024 01:53AM

Sarah Mac is on page 29 of 384

“Oh, my God! Those horns are ripping him apart!” Paco exclaimed.’ ….Oh, my God! This dialogue hurts! 😑

— Nov 15, 2024 01:29AM

Sarah Mac is on page 29 of 384

“Oh, my God! Those horns are ripping him apart!” Paco exclaimed.’ ….Oh, my God! This dialogue hurts! 😑

— Nov 15, 2024 01:29AM

Sarah Mac is starting

Another of my fave Will Davies covers. Gorgeous. 🤍🩶 Too bad the book will probably stink.

— Nov 13, 2024 12:44PM