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bani is 53% done
I just wanna see where this goes because the story is so unstructured. The characters feel forced. some event would happen, and then they would go back to the miscommunication phase.
The guy’s name is Thomas and he insists on people calling him tommy which icks me off. The way he talks about the FMC with his brothers and friends is not okay.

The kid is cute.
Nov 15, 2024 03:29AM
That First Night (Firsts in the City #1)

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