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I'm so confused. Why do the tenses change in different paragraphs?
Two pages in: "I looked around. The floor of the hall is honey-coloured wood, and the long windows let in the western light and have red velvet curtains..."
Am I wrong?
"He grinned. That's quite a sight in itself; he's a tusky sort. He's one of my favorite people, is Flower"
these examples are only two pages apart from each other from pages 1-5
— Nov 17, 2024 09:19AM
Two pages in: "I looked around. The floor of the hall is honey-coloured wood, and the long windows let in the western light and have red velvet curtains..."
Am I wrong?
"He grinned. That's quite a sight in itself; he's a tusky sort. He's one of my favorite people, is Flower"
these examples are only two pages apart from each other from pages 1-5
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