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♣ Irish Smurfétté ♣ is 48% done
The main focus of this story are the personal relationships. Business is a far second place. I'm digging it.
Apr 23, 2016 04:11PM
Risk Return (Return on Investment, #2)

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♣ Irish Smurfétté ♣
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I didn't know what to expect from this continuation of Martin and Francis' story, but I enjoyed this a lot.
Apr 24, 2016 06:48AM
Risk Return (Return on Investment, #2)


♣ Irish Smurfétté ♣
♣ Irish Smurfétté ♣ is 98% done
Martin really didn’t know what to say. Francis could be intensely romantic in this very, very odd way. Only he would expend so much thought on something seemingly so minor—but these days, he shared his thoughts with Martin, which was probably the greatest gift of all.
Apr 24, 2016 06:44AM
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♣ Irish Smurfétté ♣
♣ Irish Smurfétté ♣ is 70% done
Delving into characters. I lerves it.
Apr 24, 2016 03:51AM
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♣ Irish Smurfétté ♣
♣ Irish Smurfétté ♣ is 12% done
Martin is starting to see the old cracks in Francis' long cultivated armor. Francis has been rather blatant in letting Martin know that he trusts him implicitly.
Apr 23, 2016 06:42AM
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♣ Irish Smurfétté ♣
♣ Irish Smurfétté ♣ is 2% done
I like the way Martin's inner dialogue is subtly and seamlessly reminding us about the personalities of these characters within this first scene in a natural way.
Apr 23, 2016 05:22AM
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