Juho Pohjalainen’s Reviews > Hound > Status Update

I think you might have been better off just fading to black...

Or for setting it up for more than a couple pages, for that matter. Especially since the two characters had tried to kill each other both times they met before this.

It's the lack of commas that always strikes my eye, with these bad translations. Where do they go? At what point do they disappear? Is there no quality control of any kind there to put them back? This looks atrocious, and it's like this almost on every page! I can't believe someone could have looked at this and been like "Yeah, that's all good, let's roll".

Don't know nothing about the mythologies this one taps into. Maybe I should: seems intriguing enough, and the comic doesn't do them much justice. The translation has issues.