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Ciara is on page 209 of 296
Why do they go from calm to shouting all the time? There's no build up to this loud anger and it all changes so quickly. There's no break between scenes
Nov 28, 2024 09:31AM
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Ciara
Ciara is on page 280 of 296
YOU RESUSCITATE HIM AND THEN HE COMES BACK TO LIFE AND IMMEDIATELY STARTS FIGHTING AGAIN? GIRLYPOP WHAT
Nov 28, 2024 02:28PM
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Ciara
Ciara is on page 277 of 296
Why in every single fight does someone miss a kick, and the opponent grabs their leg to get them on the ground? Theres a lot of fights and they're all just the same thing
Nov 28, 2024 02:24PM
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Ciara
Ciara is on page 162 of 296
Plot seems good, too fast paced tho and frequent mistakes with spelling/gramma/word choice
Nov 27, 2024 03:05PM
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