MsBDiamondDiva1’s Reviews > The Ugly Beginning > Status Update

I again am so disappointed with following the opinion of other (reviews) on books! I am not saying that this book isn’t good but needs some work. For one, you are following about 5 different groups and too keep track of all the characters is a bit too much. I think there is about 15-20 characters in this story that has only about 308 pages-now you do the math! Also, the fact that you don’t know when the scene change