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Lynette
is 2% done
Really. Heroine is a earthquake victim buried under a building. Hero is trying to rescue her. Her nephew is beside her maybe dead, yet they both feel some sexual attraction or awareness when he accidently brushes against her while trying to see if the baby is still alive. WTF. Are you seriously kidding me?
— Nov 29, 2011 04:42PM
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Lynette
is 56% done
Writing is good but the plot is too obvious and not really feeling the chemistry between the hero and heroine. It feels forced instead of natural.
— Nov 30, 2011 08:11AM
