Jen’s Reviews > The Spellbook Library, Vol. 1 > Status Update
Jen
is on page 14 of 176
14 pages in and the artwork is so busy and messy I can’t tell what’s going on visually and the dialogue isn’t helping. The ten years before and ten years after scenes weren’t explained at all and I am LOST and annoyed. If this doesn’t get any more clear, DNF.
— Dec 08, 2024 05:35PM
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Jen
is 99% done
Got much better, thank goodness. What a shaky start! Review to come. 12/8/24
— Dec 08, 2024 06:09PM
