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Chapter 35

Ok time to terrify this kid because I don’t give a crap 8 years old is plenty old enough to listen especially when there’s danger
TIME TO TELL HIM BAD GUY WILL KILL IF HE DOESNT LISTEN

Chapter 31
Ok so this is pretty well written BUT
every time it’s the villains pov I really don’t need to know what he’s gonna do again and again

Also he doesn’t have to tell every person she’s ruined his life all of this definitely just makes him sound more like a childish villain

Chapter 23

I KNEW HE WAS GONNA FIND OUT THRU A NEWSPAPER ARTICLE
DAMN PAPS

Chapter 16

OK FIRST OFF FURST THIS BABYSITTER IMMEDIATELY NO BONUS
ALSO
“Harry’s offspring from hades” 🤣

Chapter 13/14
Ohoooo they be a connection with the villains huh ? Things be getting interesting

Chapter 12
Oh!? Oh…😏 he’s good

Chapter 1
I know it’s modern but hearing him pull out his phone and turn on the flashlight still threw me 🤣

Writing good so far tho it’s giving mission impossible action YES