Hilary Parr’s Reviews > Line Between Two Worlds > Status Update
Hilary Parr
is 18% done
She came to the conclusion of parallel universes very quickly.
Also the tense shift keeps throwing me off.
— Dec 12, 2024 08:21PM
Also the tense shift keeps throwing me off.
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Hilary Parr
is 56% done
I feel like scenes are too quick. I want a little more out of the soft moments with Theo. They end abruptly a lot of times with one getting mad at the other
— Dec 13, 2024 08:42PM
